This is wonderful with the Tower personified as female. I like the thoughts of the narrator sneaking across the square. The image of a wandering insect sneaking around is crisp. .interesting that the narrator never approaches the tower. Taking off shoes enforces the idea of sacred space and a sense of wonder. Slight error - as if she were preparing the [to] summon
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branchandroot
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Date: 2012-07-30 05:12 pm (UTC)