ext_351502 ([identity profile] tifaching.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gothrockrulz 2012-06-17 12:53 am (UTC)

That's lovely. I like that you've used the prompt in a way that's unexpected and kind of gorgeous. I love the language you use. Dormant is such a good choice to describe the woman waiting to emerge from the girl. It's my opinion that the girl never goes away. She's always there ready to play tag or run through a sprinkler no matter how old we get!

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